Glad I came back... Your storytelling when it comes to sad endings is top-notch! [img=recommend]

Amp?

Alayla, actually.

That recipe....pfft haha! I didn't write the whole ingredient! I'm sorry.

Hah? What?

LOL

First chap and it already has a goal. Very impressive.

FINALLY> I have read all of your recent chapters. You thought I abandoned your story? HAHAHAHAHA nope! I'll keep on reading. Well the names were so damn creative because it's based from their three lives. Writing quality is great. World background is great. The MC is mysterious as hecc and I love it!

THIS MAKES MY NOSE BLEED!!! In other words, this have a great MC.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Ok. There was originality and creativeness. Grammar seems a bit wrong on some cases. Characters are presented and described as the story goes on and I liked that. All in all your story is about to create a great future. Just don't stop till you finish it. That's all I could say basing from my level of criticism.

Very nice phrase

HAHAH. Fancy seeing you here. My fellow readers, you could also check his work out. He's story is also great.

A bit of misspell here sorry

I didn't expect that my very old book would get a review. Thank you so much, I appreciate it.

Very intriguing. Every ending of chapters are so exciting, makes me wanna read more. And also, wow. You got popular in just 8 chapters! Very nice, indeed.

Very nice MC. This story shows no matter good you are, you'll always meet bad people. The characters are well-defined. Nothing seems to be off, when it comes to grammar. Just minor. That's all I could say basing from level of criticism.

So that it would make it feel new.

Oh, I see. You're actually right. Maybe I should do the same. Thanks.

Very thrilling and mysterious. There are some minor problems when it comes to grammar. But still, the plot was very exciting. That's all I could say basing from my level of criticism.

xD. Our character had the same name.