solarage0411

The writing quality is o.k. However, it fails completely due to suspension of disbelief. The main character is an eight year old with ownership of cars, houses, businesses etc... This is not a possibility due to laws and the simple fact that a child carrying gold in a crowded market would end up dead and robbed. If Mc was 15 or older I could get over it but not an eight year old.

I got to around chapter 80 and MC became a sociopath. sociopath MCs are just not something I like.

I could not continue reading after 162 chapters. the writing quality is fine but the characters are the main problem of the story. I hate the Mc for his inability to control his juvenile emotions. I get that thr Mc has a story driven issue related to his emotional imbalance but it is very forced and I could see a better character in Marlo than the Mc.

This can not be read. Try again by editing the story!

I had to give up after 200 chapters. I thought the Mc would stop being a simp and shield for girls but he hasn't developed at all. waste of money.