DaoistHalberd

A well written and fun novel. After reading many bad fan fictions lately, it's great to stumble upon this novel. But I would like to add a little bit things other than review in case Author-san reads this. Now the clones showed up with Stussy in the manga, there is a great chance Bonney and Weevil will turn out to be clones. There are theories about how original Stussy participated in the research to get a clone of Whitebeard who she failed to get. While Bonney looks like Big Mom in hairstyle she can be Kuma's deceased daughter/wife's clone too. Kuma might have participated in Vegapunk's researches for her too. These theories are all good and such but they can turn out to be wrong too. So before they're revealed it could be nice to not touch those in the novel. Main character is not omnipotent in knowledge and no need to act on everything too. I find it perfectly okay for you to change the Bonney-Kuma relationship from the start to the reveal of the manga, but now Whitebeard-Original Stussy relationship might went too far to fix. Not that Whitebeard matters much in the novel but just saying, don't mind me much. Also great job with updates and consistent writing, writing One Piece is hard with all those mysteries and Oda refusing to reveal them. Or just forcing them to story. I still can't understand how no one heard about Rocks and only a couple people remembers him. And not mentioning Haki almost until New World too... So good luck and have fun in the journey!