MonteDT

good Ole chatGPT lol

Overall enjoyable face slapping, good fight scenes, use of logic, things get drawn out to much currently almost 250+ ch in. The story feels like it's crawling forward with character growth because get a Lil to caught up with face slapping and info dumping things already said. Otherwise great characters are diverse. They have growth shows great insight into human mentality. Good read.

Well played 👏🏾

So how can he have bald hair? They are opposites, please get some help with proof reading, you're making this harder than need be. Now so far not to bad feels a Lil rushed but I'm still here for the ride👍🏾

So this gives a war hammer 40,000 type feel and I love it, a nice gritty character development, Co stars have logical development. On chap 50 but I'm engaged, and invested. Sad to see its completed at about 340 chaps, but still sharing up to be worth the read😁.

So far it keeps you hooked after 40 chapters. They focus spreads from just the main character, they have a taste for everybody so you hope to see what they would do with your dream. Waiting for the magic element though, but for now not mad at it👍🏾

Black is a 🐳 not a warrior lol

The smart money is on option E which in turn would make option B happen😂🤣😂😎

Did some one say flag 🏴‍☠️🏳️🏴🎌🚩🏁🇱🇷🇺🇲🏴󠁧󠁢󠁷󠁬󠁳󠁿🇹🇷🇵🇸🇱🇾🇯🇲🇰🇳🇰🇷🇯🇵

Not the Evvvooooo😂🤣😂