crash_hitter

Very boring novel. There is nothing but face slapping in the novel. There was no nice character development. Utterly lacks any essence. There's no creativity in the story development.

was his soul was 10,000 yes immortal or it is soul of 10 yr kid, Turing pale for just change classes. if he was immortal he should have more control over emotions.

Although the premise of story was very good, The story progess if very bad. the story is So boring to even read 15 chapters. One of the worst story I have read, no fun at all.

logic and concept of novel is pretty good. But, the story discription were sometimes long. Character design is bad. in my opinion below average.

Although I don't have good English, this my view of novel.

Except for stability of updates, every thing was useless. (up to ch 73)No proper world back ground, dumb MC, stupid story plots and boring narration and No interesting characters or plots. Waste of my 1 weeks free passes and 30 coins.

is't it over the top to multiple the stats by 5 just by reaching gate3. A game has to fair. At most a gate 3 person has his stats increased by +10 or +20 to have advantage over normal people.

In starting chapters, some players reach lvl 50in 1.5days (3 days in-game) is looking a bit extreme to imagine what would levels be after 3yr in MC life. will they reach lvl5000 or in 3yrs. I think author never played any RPG genre games although it is fantasy it is better to use low levels for narration of story. like reaching lvl 10 after 3 days in-game.

well I give you low rating, so that you would read my comment. if I give 4 star, I don't think that people will read my review. anyway, story was good, but try to reduce description on single activity and increase no.of.activities.

theme, story line were very good. but the description was very bad. eg: if the MC has a scene to open a cap on bottle. it is enough to say " MC opened the cap of bottle". But the writers describes as " MC touched the cap. then holder the cap on to parallel sides with thumb and forefinger. He then applied torque to rotate the cap......blah....blah...blah........" making the whole story boring.