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Oh, I like this. Good chapter. You have to just present enough truth with your lies to leave doubt. Nice

What nonsense, Sasuke as a hidden shadow. The dude is a traitor to his village. Personally, I despise Itachi I wouldn’t even piss on him if he was on fire in case my urine douse is the flame. find this Sasuke to be too irresponsible to be Hokage. The only reason I wouldn’t encourage Naruto to take a leadership. Naruto at least right now doesn’t understand nuanc. He doesn’t have enough experience and patience as of now. Sasuke doesn’t have those characteristics either. If I was a loyal shinobi of the leaf, I would be pissed with this choice.

OK, I know I’ve read this story before and know you’re rewriting it but I was hoping you would change this at least. Ned has no right or authority to force him to mary his daughter. (when it happened in the past like with the Baratheon, it was because the Conqueror killed off the entire male line and forced his half brother on the female line) I suppose the rest of the north wouldn’t see him as being coerced into this union because most of them would be excited to be offered this marriage. Second thing, it is really dumb for him not to use his mindarts. He would be responsible for anyone who died because he has the power and didn’t use it because the principles. This is a medieval world. Trying to have 21st century values in a medieval world is so foolish. Titles aren’t just something you use because your pompous. Titles are used as acknowledgment of the authority and responsibility that he hold in his land. Becoming friends with Rob can never be. The Starks cannot have a vessel that is stronger and more capable than them. Rob’s duty to his family and to his authority over the north would be to strangle the power and growth of the Boltons. His growth will inevitably bring conflict between their two houses.

I like this story, but it is so painfully slow. Feels like we’re stuck in tsukuyomi.

That’s a shame. I was hoping he was going back to Westrose for a second conquest not a restoration. There’s things he can do in a conquest that he can’t do in a restoration.

I hope he doesn’t hold secrets of his enemies to help them along. He could leak secrets of danzo. Put information about him in the bingo book and his subordinates and their power and skills. List all of his accomplishments specially those that endanger the hidden leaf. Take some truth and enhance it. As long as there’s a grain of truth, you can put as much lies surrounding it

I hope he loses Mito. Only because I want his foolishness of keeping secrets to be punished. What possible reason does he still have to keep his mouth shut? For the most part for a ninja secret are good, but he’s for some reason keeping the secret of his enemy. I mean, I know at this moment he can’t say this is not mito it’s something else pretending to be her and everyone would believe him. those in the know, would wonder how he would know these things. He doesn’t have to give proof in how he knows his knowledge it’s actually scarier that he has knowledge that no one can prove how he knows. It’s aggravates me how much secrets he holds for the benefit of his enemies. He’s doing a huge favor of Black Zetsu. Zetsu biggest advantage is that no one knows anything about him, and he lives so long that he can reinvent himself for the occasion.

I like the concept and so far it’s an enjoyable story. Though it is kind of slow. I just don’t know where it’s going to go. Is it going to follow Canon since he will just tagalong with team seven? Also, I don’t really see the benefit of having the third as his teacher, specially if he’s planning on discredit him in the future.

Only thing that would make this better, is if he brought the third back. It would be great if he ordered a reanimated Horizon to eliminate his clan for betraying the village. “Everything he does is for the village.”

How much you wanna bet that Jiraiya threatened her? There’s no way she agreed to do it without being coerced. Poor Minato he had some useless people around him. His student Kakashi abandoned his son. Kakashi taught him only the tree walking technique. His other student murdered him and his wife. His teacher and father figure abandoned his child to suffer alone in the village. Who are you?