DeepChiken

That only goes to show that he should do it befor evolving them at all?

Why is every MC so brain dead? Anyone with basic reading comprehension can tell what his abilities are and his choices just don’t make sense

Which was dumb

So if an asteroid hits the ship he dies in the other world too? I feel like that defeats the point of becoming powerful In the other world if he can just get stabbed in his sleep and die randomly no?

I don’t like V

I think Quinn having super hearing able to hear a twig snap that even the girl couldn’t hear when she stepped on it, should be able to over hear some rumor the whole school is talking about

He was accepting the marrige before because he didn’t have a choice, now he does so naturally he goes with what he wants

I love the original idea but the execution is lackluster to me. One of my biggest pet peeves is setting a character up to be op, then he fights someone he should crush, and it takes 10 chapters and he barley survives. It defeats the whole purpose of what I’ve been reading to me. Besides that it’s a great novel and I would recommend everyone at least try the free chapters.

You never clarified that that’s what he was using, and if he has ten times the training as Nadia, he shouldn’t have any difficulty dealing with his guy

All wizards, it’s the same as any countries governments really