Lozz

He won't be a loner edgelord, dont worry. I wouldn't want my character to be like that either. Many people commented that they want that, but ive ignored them all and will continue ignoring them.

Also, no. I don't have a timeframe.

I have as well and I can agree that it's one of the better ones on this platform, but there are many stories that are better, espeicially on FF.net - I want my fanfic to be good. I dont have the skills to write a masterpiece, but I want it to be better than average. Right now, I would classify mine as average.

I didn't like her intro, I didn't like how quickly she trusted or how mature she was, nor did I like the how my MC shared all his secrets with her and her family and their relations. I also didn't like how I did Harry. Too mature, too developed, not broken like he should've been, etc. I will say that I liked how I did the interactions between MC and Daphne in the last few chapters, but that is something I can replicate/improve on in the future, so i'm not too bummed out. I want my fanfictions to be good. Not a masterpiece. I don't have that level of writing, but I want it to be better than average.

Thanks for the chapter.

I'll take that into account, but I still stick by my earlier point. Maybe earlier in the war it's like what you said, but later, there was a supreme tribunal headed by Barty Crouch that had maximum authority. That's why the death eaters who pleaded imperius had to bribe and blackmail others for support to get out of the charges. Plus there was the fact that no one knew who did what or even who all the death eaters were because of masks. That's why Igor Karkaroff was so hated as he turned traitor. I do agree when you said that all revolutions leave behind people of the old regimes, so it's probably as you say, too costly in both manpower and financial resources to wipe them out. Honestly, I'm not very interested in politics not am I versed in it. I understand things generally, but not the minutiae. I'll have a shot in this novel at some point, but it'll probably seem simplistic to those readers who are more knowledgable than me.

I'm not on fanfic.net, I've only posted the story here. Plus, I don't have a patreon or similar so I never bothered to post on multiple platforms.

I put twittered in purposely. Tittered just isn't as annoying and twittered is a real word. The other things you've commented on have been spelling mistakes.

Conspriacy!!!

No, I looked this one up on the HP wiki. He was friends with Lucius, but there is no indication whatsoever that he was his godfather. That's something from fanfiction.