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I really don't understand why so much work if you have almost 20 people who could ALONE win this "war", it wasn't exactly clear if the whole guild goes to the bigger world, because if not everyone there's no point in him creating a guild and recruiting random people, at this point in the story with so much that has already happened the plot should be completely different from the original, I think the author has the ability to distance himself from what LOC has already written and still be good and cohesive. Sorry for the rant, but it was making me sleepy rereading something I've already read but under completely different circumstances.
Very good story, the pace is somehow better than RSSG (although they haven't found a real challenge yet), the characters are nice, I felt that the author got too attached to the original work which brings this work closer to a Fanfic than an Original Work, I expected to see more differentiation in terms of items and future directions than can happen but the author stopped writing (I hope he returns from the bottom of my heart)
Not that Zach hasn't played against strong teams before... It doesn't make sense that his A+ dribbling skills are below average. As the system is quantifiable it knows exactly your skill level and there is no reason to lack confidence when all your skills are above A+ (assuming the sport's peak peak is probably S+)
The problem with this argument is that Zachary has visible ways of figuring out how he's going to perform, the system doesn't show any statistics really bad enough to lack confidence, and I lack the ability to be able to see the "level" of other players.
Hello, the application does not have a translation option, we use the browser's own translation option, I noticed that it was only in the last chapters of your book (316 onwards) that you have this error.