Ikunomi

Yeah I disagree with sparing bandits and with making Kakashi a seasoned trained killer of what? 30+ years just knock them out he clearly killed on the train and these bandits aren't any better

I think blonde hair would of been better considering he's German right? I assumed he looked similar to Johan Liebert

What's even the point of adding any love there if you are just gonna end up handing her over to draco?

Is he gonna be a child the whole time? that completely cuts off any chance of romance without making it weird abit disappointing

Including Ah Yin in the story had to be the worst possible choice the constant back-seat mortality and naive mentality for what? why does he even bother listening to her? like she can't do shit and generally worthless character

I assume its not the case and all pokemom are weird looking but it would of been interesting if the looks were reverse for him so the Scary looking pokemon were the cute ones to him and everyone finds him weird calling them cute

I guess its Yaoi?

I suppose its intended but his constant need of being held and comforted comes across more as him being a baby/child than someone with trauma/ptsd id expect the opposite and he would be averse to touch its weird because you swap between him needing to be held like a child and then him needing to be completely away from everyone if his ptsd stemmed from his parents then I'd assume the later would be way more common

Its not clear but I really hope it isn't anything sexual

Its a shame since most warhammer fics I've read the mc always follow the emperor it would be interesting to see a mc that's apart of chaos or maybe the drukari