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Huge pivoting point if the MC doesn't do anything at this point; all of the death and destruction would be for nothing.

alright I'm back after heiatus working on you a cover art and you've slowed down well I got some encouragement on the way writer's block is a thing that's why art still lives to this very day! artists support other artist you'll get through this don't give up the biggest part of your is precisely that it's a big story your mc all the things he's done and the different leads for the story line I'm doing basically all the characters it takes alot of looking back but companies also track past marketing to predict future viability. That's why we all have a past! Here for it being positive and sending positivity your way!

Really wet-I meAn great chapter, and definitely go to Fiora!!! I'd really love to hear of her time training🦾.

Thank you for character development and plot. Stay on top this book will even think about creating a beautiful cover in the future literally the only book I read cause the MC and characters are humanizing

Hey Marina Just Outright Killing People! I think it should be in depth like the bandits of old always turned out to be mercenaries from a decaying fief or kingdom. RECRUITMENT OF UNFORTUNATE SOLDIERS WHO LEFT HER FATHERS ARMY! YOU WORK FOR ME NOW! SHE HAS GOT THE INTIMIDATING TITLE FROM THE PREVIOUS KINGDOM AND I LIKE HOW WE JUST CREATED A FUTURE CHALLENGE FOR OUR BELOVED MC.