I don't the last part is necessary

Could you try to make it clear if the character is inner monologuing or not? It's just kinda messy to transition between third to first person without warning all the time.

Is this a copy from 'What Do You Call a Benevolent and Reasonable Person in Xianxia? An Impossibility!' ?

So Onodera won't be with Raku?

Does Raku exist in this fic?

Reminds me of Drakengard

I swear to god if they don't get married in the final chapter...

Hooded, twin chain blades, edgy af, yup this it

Gyatcha

I wonder if you could include Grand Blue into this?

MALAKA!

Thank you good sir, you don't know how much I refreshed my library to see your update

Great chapter as always, keep up the good work!

Good start! Has great potential! Wish to see more of this! I've been thirsting for a good Mato no Slave fanfic in this platform for a long time now! Hope author doesn't drop this too soon!

This chapter is wholesome and kind of beautiful. Sarina being anxious about Aqua leaving feels very relatable in a way.

Could've ended it with a spinning kick

May god bless this peak fiction. I love how the author improved upon the original by making very character in this fic feel so much more human and nuanced. Muah! Chef's kiss!