I need to know the aftermath of "Harry's death" from James and Lily POV

Please increase the length of the chapters

The chapters are too short

Just take a break and then continue otherwise the quality will drop

I just want to point out that you are making characters more like robotic to follow fate like seriously they want to say something but instead say other to follow fate's plan.

You should have atleast 10 chapters posted before asking for money....................................................................................................................

Galacta i have only senn her in one or two fics

After a long time

Kenjutsu is Sword skill while Kinjutsu is Forbidden skill

Adipurush spat on Ramayana…Whether you want to watch or not it’s your wish but remember they did Ramayana dirty and that’s not even counting the terrible graphics

Fanfics are there for a reason…It gives a way to express our thoughts on a story…You are doing just that and you are not abusing any character for that just showing your understanding of those characters which is fine…If anyone has a problem with that they should just stop reading. So just continue what you are doing

Dude call them dark wizards not black wizards it’s like you are talking about wizards from the Black family…..Also try to use Dark, Light and Grey for magics not Black and White

Well being in Anbu he can make full use of Gamer system

This and previous chapter are more like Summary

Ok you are going with CEO-verse but careful because heroines maybe in more than one film

But what movies tho? Are you gonna mix only Telugu movies or branch out to other language movies and how are you gonna integrate them with the storyline of AVPL

Ah it’s good to see that system-chan is still alive

Yeah he did not leave anything

Ingvild will be more suitable for queen than Valerie as Valerie more suitable for Bishop