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Bro the people there are so ahead of him in strength it's not even funny, a casual hit from one of the gods would kill him
Thx for the chapter VM I caught up :(
I don't think people are mad at you or think that the story is ruined. their probably just disappointed that your not killing Canon characters and annoyed at the slow increase in fujin strength that still hasn't reached S rank Anyway your story is definitely the best naruto fanfic I've read, so don't feel demotivated because your league's ahead of the garbage here
It's getting interesting
Thx for the chapter VM
The brotherhood is shaping up to be quite a force, i image they will have dozens of sages in the near future with kens teaching. So I guess they will be comparable to the hidden village's even without Ken.
This fic doesn't feel like a human wrote it ( you said you had chatgtb to help,more like it wrote everything by it self ) It doesn't have a ounce of emotion, it's bland and nothing is ever described in detail. It even does the biggest mistake in story writing, you have to show not tell, like it says the mc and professor oak were talking but we never get to hear it,we are just told it happened. Overall this super bland and uninteresting
Thx for the chapter VM :) Yeah you handled ovens growth really well,
Too bad the mc doesn't have eyes to see the greatness that jiraya-sama is offering ( the way of the cultured man ) One of the most powerful modes in naruto