Belthezzor

Her name is not Xaio Yu, it is Ururu.

Shouldn't he have in his special skills, Hierro and Cero? He got those in the loot boxes, and Hierro was part of his status page before.

This doesn't make any sense, Chakra grows with training and Just usage. This dud has been training and fighting for over six months and his Chakra reserves didn't grow at all, until he unlocked another percentage of the system. Even then, even though his first 1% gave him 100 Chakra, the other percent hen bought only added 50 to his reserves? I get not wanting to make him too OP, but blatantly withholding progress is even worse. I really hope this story improves, because between the not so good dialogue, and the crazy amount of nerfing, this story is becoming stale.

Seriously, what is this odd focus on Xavier? It's the only thing that is weighing the story down. How could a kid raised in the middle of nowhere have any experience enough with any telepath, not to mention Xavier, that would make him bitter and angry enough to be clenching his fist and quietly raging out? He has never met Xavier or heard anything bad about him in his life, and if these feelings are a leftover from Theon, why is it not flagging in his head that they aren't his (Tyr's) thoughts? It seems absurd that he is making one of the most powerful mutants in the world his enemy (in his own head) instead of having a wait and see attitude. Also, if Xavier was as much of a mind rapist and overuses his telepathy so much, why don't mutants in any movie, comic book, cartoon, whatever media have such a hard time since he could literally manipulate minds on a multi-continental level? His whole fixation just comes across as odd, an no, Xavier is nowhere near my favorite character, I just think unnecessary bashing or fixation on someone a character (SI or with meta knowledge of any kind) out of nowhere just comes off forced.

So, she says her loyalty is to the Garcias, but here she is operating behind his back and taking orders from Fury as if she works for Shield only. Makes no sense.

Uh, the "standard" fee of the goblins are stupidly high, and that Harry increased it even more, makes no sense. Real world investment managers only make 1-2% of the assets made on the account, barring smaller processing fees, etc. 20% is damn near what taxes would take depending on the amount made, and then taxes still have to come out. For as well read and "knowledgeable" as you try to make your Harry seem, he comes across as very ignorant here. I know that stories have Goblins be greedy, but even they would not be that much greedy, I don't think.

I don't understand why he would think his parents were in their thirties. They should be around 21 when they died, meaning that they had Harry at 20. They went to Hogwarts for the majority of the seventies, so depending on the which year in the seventies they started, the max age they could be when they died is 22. Unless you made this an AU and had the born much earlier and had Harry later in life.

It's not as solid as I thought it would be. It goes like this: some dialogue with weird speech patterns "blah blah blah," the MC grows powerful, "blah blah blah," the MC gets more powerful. The MC suddenly has rizz with just a few words and teasing, the MC suddenly gets more powerful, rinse and repeat. I'm not going to even mention the silly way "political maneuvering" is shown, not fleshed out, but just shown like everything else. Also, fanboys of the story don't even bother replying, you may like the story, but I don't and I don't care what you have to respond with. IF the author wants to fine, but I generally don't read replies anyway.

He's buying slippers? You mean the ones like flip flops?

Kelex: "it hold the knowledge to become the best soldier" AKA know how to plan, fight and survive in battle, etc. MC: "no, I don't need that" is he a moron? I can understand he has plans, but disregarding knowing how to fight? Dude is dumb AF. He is in DC, and as much as he might be one of those behind the scenes types, there will come time where he will have to know how to defend himself without pulling a Superman, just relying on brute force.