Pasithea_Midnight

some neat art I found of Perseus

Divide Music? A cultured author I see.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thank you for the chapter!

I'm not the type to normally type up reviews, but in my attempt to change that and filter out the garbage reviews on this site, I'll start with this story. Day one of me reading this, I looked at it through the lens of suspicion there aren't any good gamer fics and I'll say that like a fact, and if there are some, there aren't many on this sight or they have been dropped. I don't like gamer fics, they like to form a repetitive and rudimentary format of their characters constantly grinding and when they do attempt to incorporate the wider story of the world, it is so barebones and lackluster that I feel the need to blow my brains out. This is something I can't say is a problem with this story, the gamer parts have their moments, I can't say I care for them but as the integration with the wider world it is great, the characters feel real and the world lived in, all in all, the characters are likable and I see a sense of reasoning in some of their thoughts, I also quite like the aspect of the romance, the relation between Tigra, Catra, and Adora is splendid and well-formed. (This is not a harem story, it is a Polyamory. Two entirely different things as I am the biggest harem hater in the world.) The quality of the writing is great for this site, the sentences are written well, few grammar issues if any, dialogue is superb and realistic in a sense, I don't feel like it would be weird for anything said by the characters within this story to be said in real life(aside from the obvious fantastical elements and whatnot.) The writing is good, nuff said, as a fellow writer I was quite happy and surprised to find this story. The development of the story flows alongside the world background, as the story moves, more and more of the history of the world, as well as the main character, is revealed. It is done in such a fashion that it feels smooth and natural. Well done! I'll end my review with my recommendation for it as I couldn't recommend it enough! You've done a splendid job author! I as one know how hard it can be to come up with ideas plans and the like when writing - whether that be from lack of time, author's block, or simply having so many thoughts and ideas that it's nearly impossible to put a lid on some of them. Your work and ability so far is commendable. I can't say this is the best review, but I tried my best to write out my thoughts to the best of my ability.

I don't like the idea of him having a devil fruit, one he'll lose the ability to swim which sucks, but he already has mastered haki, he can literally deal with anyone. Have him be like Gold Roger, Rayleigh and Garp, some of the strongest without a devil fruit.