GentleFlame27

You must be a very strict teacher with wired glasses, that will beat a student with a ruler if they didn't do their homework ...

look here "is the felling the guilt" it say

I know my grammar is not good since I'm not an English native and I was always lazy not good at English essay writing haha but i will always try to perfect my English Anyway thanks for the honest review

Haha, thanz for reading

hallo, how are you? you seem to be getting a lot of popularity on your novel, hehe, you must be very busy writing new chapt... Did you get a contract

don't be so flustered because I am a fan of your comments because it makes me laugh that your words are soo true.

I really want to give a standing ovation for all your sarcastic comments I really meant it, but what awes me most is that you still continue reading after those comments

Thanz for your thoughts

The writing quality is very good, Story and plot also are good and the details are also good Well the world background is lacking too much, the story is rushing too much But its just opinion maybe the author have a good plan in the future

This book is decent, The grammatical errors look non-existent and the story is starting at a good pace, The starring is quite mysterious, U think The reader who likes to read some mystery and gaming novel they would love this novel However, there are fewer details about the surroundings and characters