Oh hell yeah! I love me some creative stories in Worm!

Thanks for the chapter! I can't recall if he's going to be getting more templates, but it'll cool to see what gets matched up with Tobirama if so.

Eh, you've made his abilities super inconsistent. He's made mention of and used the ability to see everything multiple times already. I really hope that the excuse isn't something stupid like, "He was raging and didn't think of it!".

Great story, but isn't this called "The Gaming Gear" over on FF? Unless you're Seerking.

Hell yeah! King of Escalation incoming!

I mean... Might be a mistake? But at the same time who wants the Joker with comedic plot armor hanging from their neck.

Excellent work! I kind of understand people screaming like rabid animals about the cuck stuff but... he kind of holds all the cards in the whole polyamory setup. The girls can have fun without him there but if he leaves everything would fall apart. What I really want to see is Sean in Worm. Similar concept but maybe running a shoe store in partnership with Parian, or a coffee shop, etc. The premise of Dead End Bar really lends itself to spinoffs.

Another awesome chapter! I imagine Coil is about to have a bad time.

Yes

100% a smooth way to become a technopath.

Good! Nice to see characters other than MC being aware. You almost never see, "Oh, that guy seems to want to kill my friend, maybe I'll keep an eye out". It's always, "Heheh, big fight, I'm strong, no need to worry".

Thanks for the chapter! I hope he doesn't keep insisting on hiding most info from her.

Thanks for the chapter! Kinda mixed feelings on the time travel shenanigans. MC's future is looking kind of sad?

It's unfortunate he's just shy of being a cosmic being and this not being an issue. Pretty sure he couldn't be snapped at that point either.

Thanks for the chapter! His character is becoming inconsistent. This is less unhinged and more angsty child which is odd with an adult mentality.

You have for sure. If it was bad I'd call it as it is, you have something pretty decent with room for improvement. Keep it up!

Interesting so far. The writing style seems a bit, immature?, is how'd I'd put it but amusing nonetheless. The flashbacks near the start were a bit much but overall the slice of life aspects were nice to read. This type of story needs really frequent updates or you'll lose the interest of the readers as it seems a bit difficult to just hop back into. Just my opinion. Thanks!

Yes, 100%.