Demonzor
A bored person
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So it all comes down to I made his power to strong gotta have mc use it in a dumb way to even it out at that point should have gave him a really limited power that could get super strong and been done
This has to be the worst pjo story ever written. The writing and story development are bad with nothing good about them like others have said how did u spend like 5 or 6 chps just writing about how they were making their forms you could have put all that in one chp. The world building is bad but not the worst but considering your basing it off a great story don’t know how you made it bad.
I’ll give them a try after I finish the ones I’m reading now