FallenAngelN

I had a review ready, but GeneralDeFartos_L already made one, and it was much better than my own, so yeah... Story bad, GeneralDeFartos_L good.

I don't care.

Entertaining, but also a failure. The point of the plot is to use his system to rob while also putting on a show to get points. Then use those points to get stronger to survive the hell that is DC. Simple right? 100 chapters in, and 5 robberies later, and what does the MC have? A powerful buzzsaw...superhuman reaction, but it's only for a few seconds...Skin that is 10% more resistant to the elements... I wish I was joking. Entertaining story, but it goes nowhere, and promises otherwise. 1-Star for balance. I'd normally give about 3 and a half stars.

A bit odd that you're focusing on that aspect out of the others, but alright. Thena is the first one, this one isn't so bad. The second one is Lansseax, it's played off like a tie, but the dragon woke up before him, and could have killed him, but didn't. So that's definitely a loss.

First of all, I want to say that I don't actually think the story deserves one star. This is given more for balance. The story is actually rather good, but not great. I can someone appreciate this inspiration from Elden ring making the main character after messmer but also just copy/pasting the dragon from elden ring went a bit too far into lazy territory, and became a negative. The story itself does have good qualities, but it's simply missing satisfaction. The story in the beginning constantly jumps around with the main characters age with zero explanation. One moment he's four, then he's eight, then 12, now 17. These time jumps happen with very little warning or explanation. It feels like many steps are just skipped over, leading to things feeling unsatisfying. Rather than seeing his growth, we only see the bullet points of it like the author is just trying to rush to the good stuff, and can't be bothered filling in the gaps. It is also rather unsatisfying that right after powering up and achieving his divinity, he just ends up losing twice right after that. Like I said, the story is good, but not great. I would normally give it about three and a half stars.

Story starts off good but becomes worse over time. I am certain the fights are AI generated as it is incredibly obvious. And I wouldn't be surprised if parts of the story were too.

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The world-building after the war isn't too bad, but you've gotta read through quite a bit of filth before you reach it. Seriously, the author makes them so overpowered that it's not even satisfying when they win, or accomplish something.

Giving a 1 star to offset the mindless 5-star reviews. If I had to rate the story, it would probably be a 3 & 1/2 stars. The story is decent but there are often grammar issues. The story can often come off as cringy as it tries too hard to force comedy sometimes. Lastly, the author makes it too obvious that they are trying to nerf the MC so they can have an excuse to buy more stuff from the shop and not be overpowered. An example is the Rasengan the MC uses is basically treated like a strong punch. They hit an enemy with 5 Rasengan at once, and the enemy is only a bit injured and can keep fighting without much issue.

Eh, it was great for awhile, and you could see effort at first, but then the story became lazy Chinese Manhua trash. Where the MC keeps putting people in their place while catching underage harem members like they're Pokemon. A shame really.