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Wangfire3dbình luậnthey already have electricity though.
Electricity.- Wangfire7dtrả lời Azzik_1vur
- Wangfire1mthtrả lời Ms_Squirtle
it's not a typo. Due to translation errors between the natives and fire nationals, some of the original meaning of the word may be lost.
"Ah! Where are my manners, these fine people are delegates from Driftbark in the west, this is Lady Stane and these are her faithful guards." The prince pointed out the natives. - Wangfire1mthtrả lời Ms_Squirtle
- Wangfire1mthtrả lời Apathy_PersonifiedCh 21 Drifting Wood
- Wangfire1mthbình luận
This guy really loves purges.
'Slaughter the entire Higher-ups and change the way things were done, restructure the whole system from the top to the bottom.' - Wangfire2mthtrả lời UthredofBebbanburg
Ah... I'm doing fine fellow hotman! The wife has just given birth to beautiful baby girl and they're both doing well. As for the rascal... I sent him away to the boiling rock to serve our great nation and to see where he may end up if continues fooling around!
"Commander, I want you to prepare the necessary equipment and logistics to field a force of 2600 soldiers at maximum. A quarter of which will be Firebending infantry, another will be Firebending cavalry, the other 650 troops will be infantry Pikemen, while the final quarter will be non-bending cavalry." Iroh locked eyes with the man. - Wangfire2mthtrả lời greatcheesemaster
- Wangfire2mthtrả lời MimicReads
- Wangfire2mthtrả lời UthredofBebbanburg
The Fire Nation military is strict and regulated. we see this when Zuko got in trouble for speaking out of turn even though he was a prince. Ozai certainly took advantage of the situation but even Iroh himself admitted that Zuko's words were rigth but his decision to speak out was wrong. I don't see a general of iroh's standing place his son in a position he wasn't fully suitable for. Even though he is royalty, he's still young and inexperienced to command a force into dangerous and unknown territories.
As he marched to the armoury he couldn't help but wipe the sweat from his palms. This was to be his first engagement on the field. At first he believed it would be at the walls of Ba Sing Se, but it seemed the spirits had other plans for him. - Wangfire2mthtrả lời UthredofBebbanburg
Yep! The Fire Nation was on its way to siege ba sing se- the fearsome Komodo-rhinos are a must.
"Commander, I want you to prepare the necessary equipment and logistics to field a force of 2600 soldiers at maximum. A quarter of which will be Firebending infantry, another will be Firebending cavalry, the other 650 troops will be infantry Pikemen, while the final quarter will be non-bending cavalry." Iroh locked eyes with the man. - Wangfire2mthtrả lời Trickery
- Wangfire3mthcông bố
this story has some pros and cons. The pros are it has good writing quality, especially for a webnovel fic being written by a non-native. you wont lose brain cells reading. now onto the cons. the fanfic is highly unrealistic with a child doing and having influence they shouldn't and no one finds this strange. if you are like me, you would have been attracted to the mc being a chemist, but the MC barely uses his chemistry knowledge at all. with what little that is used is not hyped up enough. and finally, the last con is the god awful filler! the filler itself isnt the issue entirely, the author is unable to organically introduce the original worldbuilding into the story. instead it is more like a wiki of character and world descriptions. there is little character or realism injected into the story. so all in all, if you like a story with good worldbuilding that follows the timeline of asoiaf along with realism, then dont expect too much when reading. this story has a great concept with good grammar but subpar execution.
- Wangfire3mthbình luận"I will destroy you all. I. Will. Let. You. Know. PAIN!!" Strong invisible soul power undulations slowly seeped out of his body, like some kind of illusion.