Quinox

ooooooooohhh....the mate has shown up[img=update]

🤗🤗.... loving it

I'm still noticing some typographical errors,....keep up the good work[img=update]

From the the 2 chapters you have here, I can see that you have a good novel draft prepared,...keep up the good work...and I also think you have to improve on your character description[img=recommend]

I'm liking this story....keep up the good work[img=recommend]

it has a good development...but you have to too up on your editing