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I been really liking the story telling for this fic. Blake showing off is my favorite part so far. I really look forward to what will happen next! Thanks for writing!

Every time I get annoyed that people be underestimating kishin at this point because they always get proven wrong. A chapter of people expecting optimistic results would be interesting similar to shin’s grandfather where they know his decision would succeed or even want to invest along side him.

If it was to be open for others, i rathet mc screw them all for a huge fee for using it, or give them worser versions of the engine that can still contribute. Too mich free access would not make kishin enough money.

If it was to be open for others, i rathet mc screw them all for a huge fee for using it, or give them worser gersions of the engine that can still contribute. Too mich free access would not make kishin enough money.

Story is off to a great start and I’m always a sucker for genshin stories. Story is a typical mc that get isekaied, this time being genshin. The mc is alright so far. I like that he started off at a decent level of strength rather than a weak level 1, and i would like the mc to be decently strong but not too op to the point where there is no consequences. If he got a cheat of weapon mastery then I would recommend him to either focus on a specific one or incorporate like all of them cause stories usually heavily lose focus and just forget the side powers. Same thing if mc get multiple visions or not to focus on either one or all. The grammar is good, story progressing at an ok rate, nothing much is happening. Keep up the update! Story so far is a 7/10 but can go up or down later on.

Love the reactions of the characters. I always love reading these types of fanfics where characters get to see and experience the past, present, and future and watch how important the information comes to them!