If you enjoy a story that envolves murder mysteries, magic and kingdom schemes, then you may enjoy this novel. The tragedy and tone is so poetic and sad, that reminds the song 'Gavin Luke - The Crossing'. The author also do a good job of portraying the transitions of lifestyle and the way that the MC see the world.

Nice callback and reflection of her lifestyle and now facing her new reality

What a tragedy

The man must be very angry to do with a coffee mug xD

If you want to read a dark fantasy with a pretty grim setup from the start, where the MC had to undergo a lot of emotional trauma, downfall to downfall, then you may enjoy this novel. The strongest point is the MC itself, the turns of his life and it let you wondering about how he would cope and do in the future, to escape both from himself and his very own nature.

nice build up

Nice! Breaking down like the Joker

Nice emotional undertone

Great start!

[Reviewing after chapter 30]: If you're a fan of stories that feature a protagonist who embodies both angelic and demonic qualities, similar to Devil May Cry, then this novel might be right up your alley. Admittedly, the MC doesn't quite have the same charm as Dante from Devil May Cry, but it's definitely on its way to developing its own appeal. If you appreciate stories that feature academy settings, a resourceful main character who possesses intelligence and the ability to unravel the mysteries of magic on his own, and a narrative that explores the complexities of the battle between good and evil, often blurring the lines between the two, then give it a shot :).

It looks really interesting, it kinda of reminds 'taxi driver' and 'blade runner' vibes. Gonna read it, and cheers from a fellow author :)

You're welcome :)

This was truly refreshing to read. It's "warm" it puts a smile in your face. My biggest issue is the writing, that needs polishing in both structure-wise, and how the style itself in the sense of pacing-flow. For this I recommend you to read more known books, like The Name of the Wind. I hope you go well with your story, all in all, keep up the good work.

Tip: when its thoughts, use the 'italic' in the editor, because its known globally to indicate thoughts

Tip: "Calling a mother to her child to have breakfast" sounds a bit weird, maybe: In fact, you don't need this sentence for two motives: Mother is already mentioned in the dialogue, and breakfast too.

That was fun to read, it kinda reminds me the old times where I was in the lan houses, playing Mu, Counter Strike, and having that competition. It has room for improvement, in the overall aspects of the novel, but nothing a good rewrite don't fix it. Keep up the good work, miss Orange :)

That girl healer sounds like a psychopath trying to charm her victim xD

This reminds my time playing Mu online back then

Good start! Keep it up :)

Thank you <3