GenYase

Writing Quality: 3* sometimes there are fes spelling mistakes and broken sentences. Stability of Updates 4* Story Development 2* I literally skipped 20-22 chapters (from 5 to 20 something) and i didnt miss anything. You could say that reading thesse first 24-25 chapters is a wastet of time. Story kick ups from chapter 30 something Character Design 2* In first five chapters its shown that hes a really passive character, not only that but he wont kill the dark jedi who came to kill him even when he knows he should because they have fallen too much and they will create a danger not only to him and his friends but to other innocent civilians. From chapter 37 onwards after he became the ###### he makes more sense sometimes and less the other times World Background 4* Probably the only reddeming quality of this story.

The fifth house

Bro has infinite millenniums to live and he can spare a few years to decades on a whim

Man this is just stupid...

I already dislike the MC

kurama turning himself into ten tails

Tanuki in this fanfiction... probably

diddys school

Kiwi or Vega in a few moments