BlackRoseDragon

So I like the novel but I have a couple nitpicks. First the servants shouldn't be joking or talking so casually in front of their bosses and powerful people or be using slang. One maid says I knew he would look good in any fit. Just no. and then a guard cracks jokes and the other guard with him does too. overall good but you gotta make certain things make sense. especially with people of high society using slang. and there is a couple of spelling and word choice errors.

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love this book never give it up!!!

I really enjoy this book alot. My only complaint is that I need mire chapters!!

more please!!!

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anyone heard anything from the author?

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