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The_Paragon_White

The_Paragon_White

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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White17d
    trả lời lord_couchpotato

    Only if it's in Murim worlds, because any medium Cultivation world leaves DxD in the dust in terms of power.

    Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System
    Tranh châm biếm · heavenlydawn_
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White29d
     công bố

    Bro, how does someone like such a retarded story? Where the characters have basically no depth, where the author himself knows nothing about the Nasuverse, it's basically something so stupid that it's impressive that it reached this level of idiocy.

    Fate/Fisted
    Tranh châm biếm · Bleap
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White1mth
     công bố

    A story so bad that it makes you crave, I'm not talking about the writing, but rather the half-assed and disgusting plot made especially for Yuri's sick fans, characters with no depth, clichés, and general shit. In short, a story that I don't recommend to anyone.

    The Time I Reincarnated as the King of Knights?!
    Tranh châm biếm · BeIi4l
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White2mth
     công bố

    My opinion? The story had good potential, but it started to fall apart the moment other characters were introduced, becoming... A complete disappointment, why? Their depth is non-existent, their personality is not well developed, and above all... I feel as if I was seeing an ignoble person with a superior complex when seeing the protagonist and his attitudes, in addition, he has a naivety that irritates me, teaching and basically giving power to other characters, any of which can betray you when considering that Gods have mental manipulation in their hands... Sigh, anyway, the last part is just my personal opinion and not that of a reader like the rest... ..

    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Shadow_D_Monarch3
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White2mth
     công bố

    Perhaps the author deleted my review, which he does a lot. So, I'll give you a summary, this is the worst Naruto story anyone could create, the worst? It's the author's idiocy regarding Cultivation, he doesn't know anything and tries to do something with his meager knowledge.

    Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
    Tranh châm biếm · Josh_Richie
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White2mth
     công bố

    Honestly, there are points in this story that are good, but the negative points take away any possible shine. Firstly, the protagonist has no personality, where is the trait of stubbornness or pride that made him refuse to be entertainment for a God when he became a servant? Another thing is its childishness and stupidity, added to the lack of depth, makes this story bad.

    The isekai life is not for me - I walk through the Omniverse
    Tranh châm biếm · alexis_venas
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White4mth
    trả lời Echii_Sama

    Any Fate character solos Danmachi with extreme ease, including the Gods.

    Ch 15 Ethan's Explanation!
    Danmachi: Captured by Freya at the Beginning!
    Tranh châm biếm · U22
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White6mth
     công bố

    The story started very well, at least until a certain point it was great! But after he started the simulations in Demon Slayer, things gradually got worse, the protagonist showed very retarded characteristics and in the most recent chapters this became even more concrete, he doesn't have the slightest bit of deep personality. He's basically a Beta who thinks he's chad...

    Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
    Tranh châm biếm · Novelette_Seeker
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White6mth
    bình luận

    Meh...

    Ch 169 Chapter 169: Acnologia’s POV
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Tranh châm biếm · Jovami6729
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White6mth
     công bố

    I don't know how anyone likes this type of insufficiently immersive story, full of countless negative points that ruin the story for me. Well, there's no debate about taste, I didn't like it, but you might like it.

    Reborn in originals
    Ti vi · Adams2004
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White7mth
    trả lời lorddias

    Um ataque da Balmung e bye Acnologia, a não ser que esse NP fosse nerfado.

    Ch 144 update
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Tranh châm biếm · Jovami6729
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White7mth
     công bố

    One of the worst Highschool DxD stories I've ever read in my entire life. There are so many negative points that I would spend hours writing here, so I'll summarize. I don't recommend wasting your time with this shit....

    DXD: Revenge of the forgotten
    Tranh châm biếm · Ahilash_Danie
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White7mth
    bình luận

    To be honest, if the author doesn't kill Acnologia with a blow from Balmung, I'll stop reading — it's simply impossible for him to survive an attack from such a sword, Nasuverse is infinitely superior to Fairy Tail in terms of concepts. And don't give an explanation like, Acnologia isn't a real dragon or he's immune to magic, anyone who knows about the Type-moon Universe knows that this isn't impressive at all.

    Ch 140 Chapter 140: Edolas (2)
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Tranh châm biếm · Jovami6729
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White7mth
     công bố

    I've read some bad Agianst The Gods stories, but this one is by far the worst I've ever seen, why? Simple, the protagonist is ordinary, has no knowledge of the world he is in, doesn't have a captivating personality and seems like an ignoble person without salvation. The characters are also not faithful to the novel, it looks more like Ocs than anything, in short, don't waste your time...

    Rebirth in the Divine Realms
    Tranh châm biếm · LordHornZ
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White7mth
    bình luận

    Fafnir could basically destroy the world, but cannot due to containing Fate's strength, Balmung can go head to head with an attack from Karna's Vasavi Shakti that can erase universes, so if it doesn't kill Acnologia with one Hit, consider a very big nerf ....

    Ch 131 Chapter 131: Oración Seis Aftermath
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Tranh châm biếm · Jovami6729
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White7mth
    bình luận

    Only Balmung solos Acnologia with extreme ease. I hope it doesn't nerf that weapon....

    Ch 130 Chapter 130: Oración Seis (10)
    FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH
    Tranh châm biếm · Jovami6729
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White8mth
    trả lời Yuri_yuri

    That wouldn't even be the problem, but simply the stupidity of the author himself who knows nothing about cultivation trying to write about it. And the horribly made Ocs...

    Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
    Tranh châm biếm · Josh_Richie
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White8mth
     công bố

    I really liked the different vision from other DxD stories, with the protagonist training and living among the Yokai faction, a shame that everything was poorly applied and too superficial to arrest anyone, but what ruined it for me was the fact that he taught his skills to everyone as if he were handing out sweets. It's pure naivety on the part of the protagonist, I don't particularly like this type of story. But this is just my particular and sincere taste for this review, in general the story could be good for you, my dear companions.

    The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
    Tranh châm biếm · Ryusenka
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White8mth
    trả lời thelightedghost
    Journey to the One Piece
    Tranh châm biếm · thelightedghost
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  • The_Paragon_White
    The_Paragon_White8mth
    trả lời thelightedghost

    Firstly, I didn't attack, I gave my honest opinion about a “bad” story, to prevent people from wasting their precious time on such a thing. And you're right about it being a fanfiction, but this also reflects on the author's writing ability, making it clear that it is mediocre to the point that even a twelve year old child could do better. And finally, I don't care what you think, do or think... Have a great week, mediocre writer.

    Journey to the One Piece
    Tranh châm biếm · thelightedghost
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