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I love this story immensely, I really do. But there are so many errors in the “he/she” his/hers and sometimes names.

I’m only on chapter 5 and there are so many mix ups in different names. It’s a little draggy too. No motivation to continue reading

Story is quite captivating , FL is strong. Story development is gradual but not too slow, rich with details. The biggest chink is name errors. Pls correct or you’ll lose readers

“Wife” is it from niangzi? While it means literally wife, in a lot of translations Lady is used if person calling is not the husband

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A good book! Translation is excellent. Story progresses really well, very captivating. Go ahead, start reading

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O wow. This plane doesn’t need a runway?