SeagullWatcher

*foot steps, not food steps. Unless you plan to feed them to something?

Didn't Aster need to kill all of them to prevent rumors of the Shadow Guards from spreading?

i assume it's supposed to be "... with her head bowed."?

*... done with our business ...

Though it could be that they made a correction and just forgot to delete the original text

*made mama a little stressed *gave mama a little stress are both proper sentences, but I thought the author was trying to be cute and make her baby talk (since she always does it to Aster) and say *made Mama give Mama a little stress like as if she was talking in 3rd person

We have failed terribly

hadn;y --> hadn't Author, please fix when you see this