cryzsalix

Wow, Kara was in for a real treat if she had Erza and Lucy on the menu.

The rape was actually unnecessary. And leaving aside the super dark and brilliant mental landscape of Eclipse, the fact that all the canon characters he saved are dropping like flies in such out-of-the-blue situations makes it feel like neither the protagonist nor his actions up to this point have mattered.

I think there's a slight problem with redundancy in some paragraphs. That, along with the lack of in-depth descriptions in many scenes, makes me think you're using AI to help you write. My opinion on the matter aside, you should try correcting those redundancies and expanding the descriptions; it'll make the reading feel more organic.

That is even a plus.

When Lucian did it, it made sense, since despite being young, he had been training for years under the guidance of someone very experienced. Nico and Bianca defeating so many with just a week of training and a pair of OP weapons devalues ​​their enemies too much; basically, no one is strong if they are not a main character, regardless of whether they are a demigod with years of training.

As silly as it sounds, I loved the scene where Lucian kneels before his father as the cursed knight's armor materializes over his body and vows to bring down the lightning thief.

This is the most annoying part for me about Luke's sequence so far: that it moved so absurdly fast from sequence 9 to 6, because the early sequences seemed tailor-made for him. Even Lucian, the creator of the sequences, had to put in a lot more time and effort to understand and digest his sequences.

Yes, that is a problem in itself.

While I'm still enjoying the story, it's exhibiting exactly the kind of problem I thought it would have ever since Scott's powers were explained. The power scale is getting insane, not only is it already at a point where nothing in the series could really be a danger, but even this super-killing squad of super-rare and powerful supernatural beings is about to make the entire pack even more powerful. In thirty episodes God himself will have to come down to fight Scott.