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The author knows how to use "show not tell" technique and writing, especially in narrating the characters emotion. Not just simply telling the readers that she/he fid and that. The prologue part is well-written, from there, we could really say that the remaining parts of the story would also reflect to it. It is clear and precise. Also, the synopsis is catchy. And I am wondering what 'gift' the protagonist has.

I love the narration. The wordings are simple and it's easy to read! Meaning, it is easy for us readers to understand the story without going through complicated words 💜. The story is such an engaging one that it will entice readers to move forward.

I love the description 💜

It's getting more interesting.

clean and concise

simple yet better to understand

I love the description.

Okay, so this part is surprising impressive.

ok nice word choice

How to pronounce Jarak's name? Harak? Charak? Jaerak?