No your right and its terribly ruining this MC :(

Author dont you have any pride?!! Perverting your own MC by mixing him with another fan fics MC uncomplimentary traits in contrast to the development of your own MC. Boo... boo on you .-.

I like this fan fic, but the author chose to cut and copy from another fanfic in which Issei fully mastered his powers before hand. I dont mind that, what I do mind is that it throws off the MC character, hope it doesnt continue

Too short

Why MC acts like Rito? Sigh*

Cring*

No problems.

yep evil dude suits you. https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4387774/The-Dark-Wolf-Shiro those works, if you haven't seen, will like.

thx

the elder, not uzamaki

Hidan is not going anywhere, there are bigger fish at the moment.

Woah, no need to be brutal to riser, be a bro to him and hang out, beat him nobly or something. Killing a pureblood devil no matter the reason except if that devil committed treason, seems off if the whole devil faction didn't retaliate.

Its not like a mary sue thing. It's a possibility given form. Nagato is cringy anyway. For a man, yes, but a God can do a lot more. Plus it's not like there will be no change in the MC throughout the novel.

Huh, a goddess who reincarnated the MC, and is not a obvious target for the MC harem..... so far X.X

Is that so? could you give the url for the raw version, if not too much trouble.

Nice story

Simp, is defined as helping someone because of there apearance according to you and other stuff, so doesn't that make most fanfics MC simps, since they put effort into capturing 2d wifus they don't really know?

Master ball*

Spoiler Truck-kun is actually truck-chan XD

Sloth futon, I want that.