The classics, in every variation of Naruto, are sitting somewhere in a dark corner, Danzo curses the Hokage, saying I need an MC for the root

I don’t understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mс

Why does reading chapters make my eyes bleed? Does the brain flow out of the ears?

I initially did not like the Gin character, just some random old man, on a random island conveniently having everything that an MC needs, after you see such characters you say: Oh, how convenient... And now it causes only laughter, especially these ridiculous plans in the background, which if removed at all will not change anything, in my opinion, this only spoils the story.

There is too much unnecessary pathos and cruelty, the author has confused the works, One piece is not about cruelty, it is about adventures and movements to a dream. And here, as usual, the main character is offended by something, I will become the strongest because the author's program is embedded in my brain, I will be friends with all the pirates, but at the same time I will kill all the non-key mobs by cutting them into two. Because of this ambivalent attitude to chapter 10, I decided that I had enough of this fan fiction.

From the very beginning of reading, there were vague doubts, especially at the moment of chambord islands, when I reached qiwuhai, everything fell into place, and I dropped this work in advance until blood flowed from my eyes.

In general, the genetics of the MHA world itself does not allow you to stay in the body for more than 1 quirk, this can be seen on failed nomus, people who are forcibly given new quirks and they either die, or their quirks evolve and change(or they physically change). Why was it necessary to play the card of three forces, it would be more interesting to see how his choice of three led to the merger and creation of one, full-fledged force, then the author would not have to write every time that they are three, but different and weak, and not at all quirks, but super soldiers.

That is, all readers know that he has quirks given to him by the system, but the rest of the world(fan fiction) will assume that he does not have quirks? And most likely it will be served as a gratuitous kid becomes a hero, watch for free without registration and SMS.

They are really similar, both morons, one who wanted to become a hero and did nothing for it, the other lost in a mental struggle with a 5-year-old child, and became a hero because this is the last wish.

Then it would not have been possible to play the card, the last wish of the Ex-Oki. After all, the MC is only 22, apparently at his age it is not yet supposed to have clear goals, and understanding why he needs it, in the mental struggle of memories, he was defeated by a 5-year-old boy.

At first it was interesting to read this work, I was seriously waiting for a new chapter every day. At the moment of the drug trip in which the MC fought with IM, he completely dropped it, so the desire to read just disappeared, it seemed that the author began to pay more attention to the lame quotes at the end of each chapter than to the chapters of fan fiction themselves. Author if you think this is a cool feature, then it's not, it sucks, return your attention to fan fiction, rather than a cool inappropriate quote.

You probably haven't read the books, seriously. The usual fan fiction, with the call of wives whose powers are not adapted to the world to which they are called.

Apparently the author likes this word, that's why he uses it. It's logical after all.

Everything people write about here, in a laudatory manner, raises serious doubts after reading this fanfiction. A superficial story, the main character does not cause any reaction at all, just a dude who is in every second fanfiction, and the characters surrounding him are just NPCs, from which there is no need in principle, remove them and the story will not change in any way.

No way, put up with it.

The classic Chinese emigrant. Chinese restaurant, Chinatown, will try to drive to Colleen Wing

The author enslaved all the characters and ordered them to be the background for the main character. - That's how this fanfiction feels. You read and think how convenient everything is, and the pirates leave loot in the bodies, allowing the hero to pick up the remnants, the main characters just nod to all requests, a soulless story turns out.

Why is everything so tense? And it feels like the author literally enslaved Shakki, and ordered her to be a dumb mob.

Wait, the pirates searched the bodies, but they didn't take the weapons, the wallets? How convenient...

The dialogues are so strained that I read them with my hand to my face. Zoro generally feels like a stupid dummy, or a mob. Dude, they recently fought against people who use the mantra, the first thing Zoro had to think about was that there was another mantra user in front of him. The chapter is about what the main character is pretentious, and all the others in front of him are not. I like your story, please pay more attention to the other characters, so that they do not look like a simple background for the MC.