JamesAnthony1999

Thanks for the chapter!

Je t'aime = I love you Saving others from having to Google it.

Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to more and what else the group will be doing in the Hogwarts years

Not the biggest fan of one piece but it was written well without any knowledge of the series needed for the short arc. Love the Harry Potter books and movies and I am really enjoying the story so far, looking forward to reading more!

Glad to have more of your work to read! I regularly check up on your profile once every month or two hoping to find a new story, thanks for the great read so far at chapter 70, looking forward to hopefully lots more!

After reading the end of chapter 31*

did his best to appear calm*

With his loot* secured

'and had even* met'

Enjoyed it quite a bit for the first 30 chapters. Quite a few spelling errors but it was still mostly readable. Some things such as quantity of ships built or the strength/speed of enhanced people or the quantity of money seems exaggerated and too unrealistic even with the AU changes to the world and characters. Just comparing what others have compared to what the MC and her faction has the difference is too large and exaggerated. After reading the ending of chapter 1 I decided to stop reading. Danny is my fav character and to know that nothing has changed for her even up to the point of her brothers death just bothers me. Thanks for the read so far but this is where I part with this story. Good luck author and I hope to read other stories of yours in the future.