Ryker_Bale

Just finished reading till chap 6, this and it pulled me in fast. Aamir is such a relatable character. The way he goes from being this unsure teen to tapping into something powerful he doesn’t even understand yet? Loved that. The whole beast invasion was intense, especially when he kills the Predator-class beast and just stands there like “what the hell did I just do?” That moment hit hard. Also, the Adreno Arts system and the class rankings of the beasts are super cool. feels like a mix of anime and classic RPG, in a good way. And I really liked the emotional parts too, especially the scene with Riya. Can’t wait to see where it goes next.

Thank you!

Thank you!

to give me any tips, u would have to read all chapters.

I like Felix. I was confused a few times, but you clear things up later on. Not my place to judge writing quality, but I didn’t notice any flaws. I willl stick around and see what gonna happen :)

A bit confusing why Sindy act like that...

yayy wolvessss <3

Honestly, I like it a lot. It's new to me to be drawn into this world of Hinduism(?), but it's so close to Chinese taste, due to Buddhism, Zen, etc. I found it great. So you can count on me to stick around.

money always help xD