Too long bro. Tnx for the chap.

Tnx

I like this DD fan fic very much. Usually when you read a DD fanfic it’s always a MC regardless where his starting point is goes around collecting a harem. There are very less number of fanfics with a good story writting. Thanks for the mass release 2day

Dropped

I think this is not feasible as the abilities he will gain from that process are mostly similar as they all come from the same beast. Instead he can hunt orther life or support type plant beasts instead. Because with truth seeking balls and cultivation of 60+ rank he can have huge power.

Happy new year Author

Great chap author . Reading from the 1st chap keep it up

It is easier for other people to say that to her. But after experiencing what they have at the black organization and getting separated for so long from each other. They will exhibit some extreme emotional detachment issues.

Feel wrath

Change the last sentence wording man, it is bad.

I know this is awkward, but she is right. Everyone has the right to persue their happiness if money can buy that it’s ’ their wish. Even if she is materialistic I don’t think it’ bad. Its only bad if she despises low income people and treats them bad otherwise its not anyone’s problem.

One of my favorite

More than unreliable , the user of the system is brain dead. User wants help with every little task and even need the systems reminders for most little and important situations. You have understand the system is just a helper with useful functions. It’s your job on how to use them effectively.

Bro you read too many dark Pokémon theamed fan fics. Mostly the league in here is very positive. Except a few dark individuals every one in league take care of Pokémon very nicely.

Thanks for the cap

See at the end MC wanted something materialistic for the apology. This is just his greed not about feelings. Because Tokiwa already expressed his feeling and appreciation for MCs talent in the Forest by showing him the cruelty of ancient world and his sincerity about forgetting the grudge between their families. He even went as far as locking up his son for his wrong doings. Also, isn’t it because of Lloyd and Tokiwa the he took that particular path and encountered the two legendary Pokémon?

I don’t think so, it’s more like suggesting. Mc can decline if he doesn’t want to do it. There are no penalties.

Thanks for the TL.

Thanks for the chapter. Did you consider mass release.

the most worthless and useless, brain dead MC I have ever read. The first insti nct a person experiences when they are in an unknown location is to know more about there surroundings and what they can learn about the place that are in and about it’ people. But the MC just leaves it to his half a**ed knowledge with out learning anything. And if he wanted to simplify cultivation to be automated and passive without needing to meditate, why not do the same to all the Billshit of him being a medic and use the all ‘ omnipotent’ energy to automate recovery also, all this s*** about him being a modern person and different culture is really annoying. And saying cringe to cultivation names, while the name he himself decided on is a Greek gods name. I AM NEVER A PERSON TO SAY THIS, AND MANY TIMEs EVEN IF THE WRITING QUALITY IS BAD I ENCOURAGE AUTHORS TO KEEP DOING THEIR BEST AND SUGGEST AND COMMENT MY OPPINIONS. BUT THIS TIME I WOULD LIKE THE AUTHOR TO HOLE HEARTEDLY ASK TO STOP WRITING THIS NOVEL AND START WITH SOMETH ING NEW. SORRY IF THIS HURT YOU AUTHOR BUT I REALLY DO NOT LIKE THIS.