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It just doesn't look like this is your first novel. You have a good control of your words and really love the initial development of the plot. It keeps the reader hooked.

I love the initial flow of the novel. I don't swing by fantasy or action genre much, but it definitely adds to the list for now. Looking forward to reading the whole thing.

It's easy to flow and has good writing. There are no grammatical errors and the author has done a good job in going with a background and then jumping into the plot.

I honestly got tangled up in the plot. From the world background to the innovative story-line, the author has a lot of potential to explore. Loved reading the initial chapters and hopefully, this story will go for an amazing plot development!

Thank you! Hope you stick around and love the plot as well! Would love to hear your insights!

Thank you so much for your kind words! Hope you stick around and give love to my work!

It has a strong plot. Loved the details and character development. There are few grammatical errors, so it is easy to follow. Looking forward to the next chapters! Good job, author!

I love your work! Amazing details and easy to read. Loved how you portray real life lessons. Definitely adding to my library! It has a strong plot and no sloppy details.

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yeah, she is the girl in the 1st chap. About brother, you need to read hehehe