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Why would Fast Forwarding help the others to survive? He left them in a cracking underground bunker. Sorry but I don't understand.
Are you Sirius? Haha
Author, don't forget the Cure via Thorian or Thorian Spores ;) Thanks for the Chapter
The main problem in my eyes, was choosing the name Katsuki at the start because it appeared as if it didn't coincide with the naming conventions of the Eternal Kingdom because they seemed to be Germanic. At least for royalty. But upon deeper analysis it is clear that the naming system is mixed. We have names like Wiesbaden(German City) Aslan(Turkish meaning courage) Ashur(hebraic for Month) Ren(Japanese meaning Lotus) Irene(Greek m. the Peaceful) Mercedes(Spanish m. Merciful) to name a few. So overtime the name Katsuki got acceptable. It was too Japanese in the beginning but changing it to Seika would refresh that notion. Therefore keeping it Katsuki now would be better. A difference is the name of the kingdom. Kunlun is too Chinese or more like too entrenched in Chinese mythology for it to fit in with the history of the eternal kingdom. If the kingdom name were Chinese in the beginning, there would be no problem. But it is too stark a contrast especially for the population there. Apart from this, renaming a country is a bigger act than simply entering it in a system dialog at least for NPCs. People identify themselves with their country name and history, that doesn't change from one sec to the other unless there are apt circumstances. And it would definitely raise the suspicions of the player base. These are just my personal notions. In the end (it doesn't even matter xD ) it is completely up to you. 👍
Wasn't the Thief the future Sandman and had a Daughter?
*Gryffindor
I would use that spell BEFORE handing them pills to swallow, because of antibiotic-resistant pathogens especially in a hospital. Always clean yourself before touching something that you put in your Body.
This feels too easy and would allow too many other Ki-Users. I would suggest, that they needed a spark of Ki from the MC. Something like a shock to the system kind of thing to jumpstart the awakening from passive System to active system. Basically it needs an external stimulus. MC's stimulus would have been his species. But of course it is your story. Just feels like a massive loophole/plot hole. Thanks for the Chapter
Alternative Ending: And then, nothing happend. Nyarlathotep looked at Adam, with a questioning Gaze. "You are most likely asking yourself why nothing is happening, right?" "What did you do?!" "Quite simple really...i chose as sacrifice that...which connects us, since that should be more powerful as it incorporates part of your power, right?" "That shouldn't be possible!" "It was quite simple really. I would be stupid, not thinking of that solution. Never underestimate a True Prankster" xD just for fun
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