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too short and funny story. hopefully the author of this novel is not a Chuunibyou. because I'm traumatized by meeting Chuunibyou people. They attack us at unexpected times and places.

I am not your employee to obey all these and that orders, I comment because there is a novel that is very similar to the pattern and writing that you have. The first novel of the main world is Dxd and the second novel of the main world is in harry potter. (2 Chinese novels that have similarities) You are quite cunning to change it, but the words, style and phrases used are very typical of china, I'm not easily fooled, by the inspired words at the end. Are you really a Chinese person who writes on webnovel? I don't think you are

of course you will be bored, because this is a translated novel that has been changed enough to become a new novel

of course you will be bored, because this is a translated novel that has been changed enough to become a new novel

This is a Chinese translation novel, the author only changed it a little but there are a lot of traces, even though it was changed like a new novel. The core of this story is the MC who becomes a looter, robber and rapist manipulator (harem seeking). nothing important just jump to some anime and movies then rob. that's all

why is this scene so similar to a chinese fanfic novel? even the words are very similar just a little change. i already got what i wanted, this fanfic novel is just copy paste. but the author is quite cunning by changing a little bit of the writing so that the story continues. i even thought this novel was a translation

I agree

i have skipped all chapters of this fanfic story, instead of being iron man or solo leveling mc, this mc becomes a slave for side characters and many characters from danmachi. even more ridiculous, maybe because he is the author of this trash novel, why did you open a shop? just to show off? but act like a slave worker? if the adventurer group needs a shovel, you will be the shovel, if they need a spoon, you will be the spoon hahaha not at all just become a slave for every adventurer in orario and become the mc's dog

so now you believe? i give rating 1...........................................................................................................................[img=nervous]

you know what i remember when reading your novel? i was light when i read the chinese novel Diablo Destruction (暗黑破坏神之毁灭) and i read it until chapter 4000. In short i hope you don't take references from the chinese mindset, lately i've been really disgusted with them, why? do you know danmachi? hell they release a lot of fanfics on the neet chinese channel web by releasing massive chapters. whether it's DanmachiXFate, Danmachi XMarvexDC, DanmachiXSolo leveling, DanmchiXMinecraff xTerraria, DanmachiXNaruto, etc. Hell yeah it's all money, but the chinese mindset is racist and the story of stupid mc (author) acts without any consequences in their actions, which makes their novels feel the same even though they have different authors. they hate japan and have grudges (read history) but all fanfic releases are more than original i don't know until 2025 why western or non-chinese writers follow mindsed They, did China's brainwashing program work?