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Void_Hawk

Void_Hawk

Lv3
2018-08-20 đã tham giaGlobal
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126.5h

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5

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15
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
     công bố

    无敌从签到系统开始最新章节 rawrrrr..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

    altalt
    I Become Invincible By Signing In
    Thành thị · Sweet Brand Chewtoy
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
    trả lời Claqiooo

    开局签到亿万豪宅

    altalt
    I Signed-In For A Billion Dollar Mansion From The Very Beginning
    Thành thị · Legendary Youth
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
    trả lời Max_Zeon

    The military guys when he asks for the meteorite

    altalt
    Apocalypse: My Technological City has Infinite Upgrades
    Khoa huyễn · Oranges are not Sour
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk2yr
     công bố

    GOOD UNTIL 35TH CHAPTER. A guy shot a bullet at MC, mc doesn't kill him. A random guy asking MC to take him in. MC shoots the guy on his head. A normal guy to a pychopath. What happened to the logic with this author?

    altalt
    Apocalypse: My Technological City has Infinite Upgrades
    Khoa huyễn · Oranges are not Sour
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    bình luận

    get the **** done with the details. 7 chps still dumping infos.

    Ch 7 Mysterious Key
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    Tanky Mage System
    Kỳ huyễn · Black Sky
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    Reading this feels like a novel written by a Reader rather than an Author. There is no exciting plots, the MC is plain without much character. Supposedly a guy with ***** previous life and plus 17 years, but still acts like a child, no uniqueness to him . Most characters are also bland. This is a mixed fruit juice of a reader who read a lot of beast taming novels.

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    All My Beasts are Legendary
    Huyền huyễn · Da Yu Is Fat Again
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    The title of this novel should be "How not to write a cliche story". I don't know why the author even bother to write. Just like other chinese novels the author dumps a back stabber character who supposedly hate MC while he was in his low. Even though he owes him too much. Just character after character was ripped off of old chinese novels without even bothering to design a plot or character. Same old face slapping to character who hate MC with little to no reason.

    altalt
    Museum of Deadly Beasts
    Huyền huyễn · Diabolical Eggplant
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    Read upto 67 on raw, but still didn't find anything interesting or a proper image of world building. Unlike LOTM which hooks up from the start, this novel seriously lacks any. The author just goes on a never ending phase of storytelling without any twits or fun. So it's a disappointment for me.

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    Embers Ad Infinitum
    Khoa huyễn · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    bình luận

    stupid cliché..

    Her skin was fair and smooth and she had a pretty-looking face. She was already a really cute girl even if she was a chubby one at the same time.
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    Skeleton's Training Manual
    Thành thị · Angry Laugh
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    bình luận

    I can't digest the fact that there is always someone who offends MC for no reason. why do cn novels use this cliche always.

    "What are you so afraid of, Wang Shuo? His dad's bankrupt and his girlfriend left him. He's just a piece of junk now. What wouldn't I dare say?" the young man referred to as Fu Jiafeng said as he steeled himself and looked at Su Mo without fear.
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    Boss Monster Chat Group
    Du hí · Boating Lyrics
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    I've already read this novel upto 370 chapters. The story starts okay, but after 100 chps, it straight dives into clichés. If you want to burn time then this novel is good. Other than that it's average. And somewhere around starting from 250 chps, he does nothing but killing people.

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    Picking Up Attributes From Today
    Huyền huyễn · Panda Reunion
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    One word to describe the novel is "Random". Everything is so random like the author wrote it without thinking or giving any considerations for the plot.

    altalt
    Dragon Tamer
    Huyền huyễn · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
    bình luận

    Everything feels so random!!

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: The Degenerate Dragon
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    Dragon Tamer
    Huyền huyễn · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    Started average, but the story picked up quickly. Very Entertaining and well-written stuff. A worthy novel after months from Webnovel. 10/10. Hope this gets picked up soon.

    altalt
    My Prehistoric Man Is Incredible
    Huyền huyễn · Bamboo Thorns Without Edge
    detail
  • Void_Hawk
    Void_Hawk3yr
     công bố

    The story starts great, but after/from 17th chapter story takes a u-turn into a utter disappointment. The author clearly wants to increase his word count after 15chps.

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