SexyDonut

yes

The sentance is still logically sound though. even if it might not take a day or 2 to get weak. But 7-10 days he would. not only that but even if he wouldn't be 'weak' he would have less energy

Because what he kills might not be considered food by the system. esspiecslly if it's something like a orc, goblin, etc. Not only that but farmers required a constant upkeep of feed. For the undead it's a one time cost.

Just the fact your paying for reviews and spamming these comments i can tell it's a bad fast food style book as a money grabbing attempt from you. I'll make sure to review on both here and rr

U dropped at chapter 20. The information was no where near irrelevant by then. Also I'd say it to your face no problem. When your 6'4, 260 pounds, and born and raised in Florida you find that you have no problem saying anything to anyone.

Yes. It stated earlier that the resources used to upgrade previous components were unrecoverable. it was the reason he didn't upgrade the last shield above level 9

No, it opens 10 gates in 10 different locations. So anyone that finds a gate can use it.

Now this is just the bare basics of what he could do. Instead of selling his countries unique products he could TRADE them for another countries unique products. He got $100 worth of unique products from his country. The country (country 2)he's trading them with values those products at $400 so they trade him $400 worth of there unique products. He then goes to country 3 who values those goods at $800, because there unique to country 2 and country 3 can't get them. Continue to do so an snowball. The option of outright selling such a cheap and widely available ore at his market is the WORST option. the fact that you thought it was the best is mind blowing

your the one beyond help here. He's selling widely avaliable and common metal to turn into cash that he can use to purchase goods unique to his area. I know you will have trouble grasping why that's important so I'll break it down in an understandable example. A merchant finds a iron mine. He has said Iron mined, he sells iron to his country, for ease of understanding we will say $100. He uses those $100 to buy 5 of a unique product of his country. He then goes to a different country and sells each of those unique products for $100 EACH. making a profit 4x then the worth of iron. Iron being a common and easy to get resoucre EVEYWHERE. Do you understand how stupid your making yourself look now?

If the MC doesn't have interesting things happening to him would he truly be a MC worth writing about?