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Writing is good aloug with the updates. I’m being harsh but the story grows then flounders really fast. You think your getting adventure then the mc refuses to leave his home for fear of a rouge curse user messing up his family. You think it’s harem(which I dislike) but it is 100 yr olds playing will they won’t they with children. it’s feels extremely forced because why are you flirting with children as 100+ years old like grow up you horn ball. Then you got the action which has bland ultra easy infiltrations, crypto scams, deep fakes that you know can’t fail to the end games war scenes that you also know won’t end in a loss cause the story ain’t deep like that. like pick a lane Urban fantasy harem or urban dark fantasy because this story is suffering from a identity crisis.
Elinor really is terrible
This the worst team up ever
Like when the secret villain says his evil plan and even tho the mc is within earshot he somehow doesn’t hear it.
Is this one of those story’s where superhumans have selective super hearing.
Percival just isn’t like able. He probably try to scope out how hard it would be to fight Allen
I just remembered his ability is also blood related he really is a orc kid
Maybe I’m tripping but I’ll always hope for a orc mom reunion
Kill shots for the oracle but a throw for Allen she might remember him