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Not gonna lie this is the best review so far. Although it hurt me to admit it my story have lost it identity. I don’t care about your intention when writing this review but thank you, I learn a lot from it.
That would take longer since Odin wouldn’t just give out Uru easily.
As much as I want to make him some man of pride that go against a big force without flinching you must understand he was just a business before this life. People tense to act according to there comfort zone sent this is his.
Your argument is correct that none of them can harm him and he could do thing risky. However you must realize they don’t have a way to harm him because they never encounter and enemy with the same capabilities as him. You need to understand that so far Wakandan weapon is design to fight against normal human. If he were to be there enemy they would create weapons that are design to kill him. And at that point he would face lots of danger. You must understand that any nation is dangerous. You can look at Superman for reference he’s invincible but they find ways to fk him. The main character could meet the same fate. I am trying to write a realistic fanfic. Not one where a nation or powerful organization look like chicken ready to be killed.
Still it’s just alright that he need to recruit enough disciple first before he go to the past since people in the past aren’t as smart as people the modern age.
I don’t think you understand something. Making an enemy of a whole nation isn’t easy. Sure he could escape from them or do damage but he ain’t going to be having a calm life after. Imagine a whole nation setting there sight to kill you. Even if he have tremendous strenght he’s not invincible not yet. If he were at idk golden core sure. However he’s only like near hulk level. Wakanda using there advance technology can easily fk the mc up. you can argue that T’Chaka wouldn’t do anything about it and just watch, but his people wouldn’t. The secret would eventually be found out since T’Chaka decision to give away 100 kilograms of vibranium would cause public outrage. Many would investigate it and find out T’Chaka past then the deal is problem and you would have Wakanda as your enemy. He’s accept the deal because only that would make the people of Wakanda be at ease. Since the vibranium isn’t leaving them. Also what if they monitor him can anyone of them replicate his action, no. The most he lose is revealing his ability. While this is a lost it bring many benefit but I am pretty you wouldn’t see the benefit since you would probably drop by that point.
From the quick research I did Wakanda is in Uganda. I think?
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I think you misunderstand my wording when I say mortal it means he have his mortal body realm body just without the Qi.
I didn’t read to that part so I do not understand it too well. If you have information on it I will put it in.