MooseMax

yeah, some sci fi movie where if you dident pay your debts the collectors came and took the organs that they had the debt on, even if they people died

that you put first blood in and use it instead of first kill for bosses or first clear for dungeons and quests will sooner or later annoy more people...

why did the "boss" fight seem like a turn based fight? he could have used the stick to hit it or cast heal on himself, and the burn that have 5% of target HP/min is really op, a lvl 1 spell potentially dealing millions of hp in damage to a high teir boss

the problem is that items can't stack, think how annoying/difficult minecraft would be if items could not stack...

he could have taken the bodies...

the world is incredibly detailed qt the start with all the small hits about it, I have high hopes for this novel since several others I have read just throws waay too much Information and details on you and it messes up the pacing

it's good but can you please edit the chapter so the capital letters that are everywhere are removed? it will be much easier to read it then, I'm guessing that many people stopped reading because of them

Good so far, but place edit the overwhelming ammount of capital letters I almost every sentence and make is consistent ie Ancient Voice and in the next sentence it's Ancient voice... put only the important thing I capital letter like Fate or don't

about 10 points for one credit

the acceleration seems abit low for a "super duper scifi high tech" car