yokedjaguar

I didn't know it was possible to read a broken record. It's mine, it's rightfully mine, oh it's mine mother's. Jesus, write something else my man. It's what 4 chapters of the same shit

I have never read a book nor a fanfic that has ever given me goosebumps until today. The grammars clean, the story is enriching, the Author has true heartfelt knowledge and an obvious passion about what they're writing. Webnovel is kicking 2025 off hard with a story like this. Well done, Author.

Solid read, not only is the English eligible, but there's correct grammar. Everything fits together like a puzzle. The hook just keeps going. For the first time in a minute, I haven't been bored reading or thinking about reading something else. Honestly, 10/10 read. Plus, the character has a bit of development going on. It's too early to say how far it'll go, though.

The easiest way to spot Chatgpt is how everyone talks. How every piece of dialog is picked apart before the dialog even starts, and then after the dialog has been said, it's picked to the bone, lol.

hmmm, author doesn't know basic law? Self defense isn't a thing anymore? Someone's a little silly, aren't they.

Everything about it feels wrong Especially the grammar. I don't know why, the vibes are just off. Outside of the vibes, learn how to write in English before tackling this or use grammarly at least. Hell chatgpt would've been better than that shit.

Has the Author ever had a conversation? With how dog sh it these conversations have been, I'm assuming you've never even spoken to your parents, much less an acquaintance. Sh it was atrocious.

Grammar sucks, ability is too OP for this world, not much else to say. This may or may not be your cup of tea. .

Honestly, it's the English and the conversations that ruin the story. Also, the authors "Genius" character. The biggest problem with genius characters are the authors themselves can't match up. So just ask for something else. That way, you can blame it on character development.

The mc is mentally incapable. It's as simple as that. I don't know if it's the og author or the translator, but the guy is failing at the whole mysterious robot bullshit, not only that. He was allowed to become junnin off rip. Let's not forget Kurenei falling in love with the guy in 2.5 seconds. Don't waste your time. It's dog shite.