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beginner or not, is it not your role as a writer to use the correct words?

beginner or not, is it not your role as a writer to use the correct words?

there are literally apps, even AI to correct your grammar these days. I don't get why the quality hasn't increased even a little

there are literally apps, even AI to correct your grammar these days. I don't get why the quality hasn't increased even a little

everyplace near the boss zombie is a battlezone, so technically he should have gotten the 20points

everyplace near the boss zombie is a battlezone, so technically he should have gotten the 20points

this story is weird, it implies that from HO world, he got isekaid to thw Witcher world, but in the proceeding paragraphs, he barely knows anything or doesn't remember much about the HP world . lots of inconsistencies

apathetic mc. lots of inconsistencies and weird shit going on. ex. he talks weirdly to his parents; he went to ollivanders, got a silver wand right away, and in the next sentence, said he doesn't have enough time to buy his school stuff, so he asked his house elf to help. In the next scene, it was the next day and he has to go to school, so he literally got his hogwarts letter a day before the train ride/great feast. He got sorted to slytherin and dueled 2 people to be secret prefect, and the rest which he should duel didn't get their chance, and that was skipped. the next day, he woke up and memorized a lot of the passages and pathways inside hogwarts, but yet got to class on time at the same time (does he have the shadow clone jutsu to do the exploring for him?). he was in the ministry party by fudge, and this new character an Adams dueled with Draco, used crucio and didn't get any repercussion at a ministry event?!? All these and more, full of inconsistencies, incongruence, and plot holes. Would not recommend.

harry, a first year conjured birds and sent them towards his opponent. what a joke

he got his hogwarts letter a day before the start of class?!? doubt it