BlindCentaur

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Hey guys! I'm reading this great webnovel here since its first 50 chapters. I read some reviews here and I'd like to clarify some points (although obviously I'm not the author neither I represent him). First of all, YES, the author uses the Flashback technique during the narration and I find great, because the plot follows only sunny's perspective of everything and the flashbach brought a new light of mysteries thats really exciting to follow and deduce "why is that happening?", "what is this?" and stuff like that. That enriches a lot the plot. Second, we are SOO used to poor plots and narratives inside this website that we have this misconception that the novels must be fast paced with new information being thrown in our face every chapter. The same as any Fast Food. In this novel we can have a proper meal you know. the same kind of pace and mysteries that we see in great fantasy books like LOTR. Lets enjoy the plot guys! Dont make this gem here follow the fast food receipe! :D

yeah! If anyone with enough drawing and editing skills creates some arts from this great novel here I'd be really grateful! 😬 It doesn't need to be anything fancy you know, just some scenes from the novel like this one "the first king grave" or the first tyrant in sunny's first nigthmare being shreded by the shadows (I know I said "nothing fancy" haha)... stuff like that :D

A moving statue? why this one is diffent from others? Is perhaos enchanted? Or the statue itself is a nightmare creature? Maybe is being parisitized by a nightmare?

What is the 'fast and safe' way to reach the southern borders?

did Sunny get the key?

Great Chapter as always! However, quick question to the author! Do you plan to write a summary with the detailed differences of the grade of nightmare mosters and awakeners? It's been pretty hard to find the acurate information in the previous chapters.

What is right? What is wrong? Good chapter! It's good to see a plot where the bad and good is the same

About Cassie's dream: "There was a lonely start burning in the black skies, and under its light, the castle was suddenly consumed by fire, with rivers of blood flowing down its hall". I think a herd of nightmare's beast will invade the settlament and the Castle, doing a killing spree in their way. "I saw a corpse in golden armor sitting in a throne". The king dies, but I bet for someone and not a beast. "A woman with a bronze spear drowning in a tide of monsters". Effie will most probably try to defend the settlement by her own. "An archer trying to pierce the falling sky with his arrows". He is most probably Night, but idk if he's trying to kill something or literally trying to 'pierce the skies'.