thethomas

noticed this both times too. probably some kinda lemur or canopy dweller.

I disagree. Ronin were more like bandit leaders. Steel was scarce in Japan, so a Ronin with a steel sword was a big deal, peasants with iron weapons were not. A group of ronin was a legitimate threat to the sovereignty of feudal lords, a single ronin was a potential armsmen and thus a valuable recruit to be courted.

This is a decent outline for a story. There is very little characterization and what little there is, is contradictory. Dialogue is stiff, impersonal, and scarce. There is little conflict beyond those scenes meant to demonstrate the MC's power and success. There is very little description of settings and imagery is non-existent. tldr; It's a story outline for a power fantasy set in StarWars.

the imperium undergone-> the imperium had undergone / the imperium underwent

speaking of arthurian legends I hope we see a lady of the lake cameo

She's the goddess of hearth and home. civilization is just one big home we all live in. seems to me she's the only one with a decent idea.

he even emphasized the difference to imply his surprise

DNA analysis doesn't exist yet

I woke up to find myself in a dark space. I couldn't hear or see anything, and it felt like I was in a pool of fluid. It was a strangely comfortable experience, but it was a short lived feeling and my comfortable world began to tremble as I felt myself pulled towards a light. Regardless of how hard I struggled it was futile. I tried to spruce it up a little so you've got an example. hope this helps with your pronoun questions!

in most places you can substitute another pronoun such as "it" example: I felt like I was in a pool -> It felt like I was in a pool.