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The fast development of his team is by design but I agree I can slow it down a little bit, although it has been 100k words already and Firefly has still not evolved into Charizard. I don't want to spoil things but I have a "solution" that is not a xianxia trick to the situation, the only tip I can offer is that it's related to Leaf and will make journeying to other regions in the future something possible. I mean, every pokemon fic seems to revolve only around a single region, the journey starts with the first pokemon and ends with a cataclysmic showdown against a legendary or against one of the terrorist organizations. I want to eventually have Emmet go against everything Ash did (with some small exceptions), so the story has to allow him to have a way to travel through the world and beat each League while tackling the issues of the regions in a timely fashion. The fast growth is necessary, otherwise him facing Mewtwo and standing his ground will be even more ludicrous.
I'm not a fan of angst but I get your point, I will strive to improve in this aspect and maybe this fic will eventually be something you like :)
I get your point and will take it in consideration moving forward. Him being a 15 year old with a sheltered life made him oblivious to a lot of things, I will focus more on putting him in situations that will make him mature faster, but it is hard to capture how people mature with words. All I can do is promise to improve this aspect. Hope you stick around enough to see the results :)
Your question is totally valid. One of the most important aspects I'm trying to approach as the story develops is how exactly EM works and in which scenarios it is "triggered".I don't want to spoil much but during this first part (Kanto part of the journey) Emmet will learn a little bit about EM but won't explore it in depth for a multitude of reasons, one of them is indeed that he is a 15 year old with absolute no experience in handling pokemon at all. I hate to be cryptic but I can't seem to find a way to properly explain it to you without giving away one of EM's major weaknesses.What I can say is that when I designed EM I started with what it couldn't do, not what it could do. And so far in the story none of the "can't" have been shown.