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That part you quoted has zero romantic connotations, even more so since it's stated, right after, that he 'bedded' women. Though given the context, I can understand how you may have come to that conclusion. To your second point, well, this seems more of a personal opinion. Leandro's hesitation and excuses stem from past trauma and self-preservation instincts. It was never my intention to present him as willfully ignorant and immature. Instead of having someone who launches headfirst into relationships just for smut content, I'm trying to give complexity to each chatacter - did I fail? Who knows. If there is some idiot out there who is thoroughly enjoying this story and the characters, then I did something right, at least. Leandro's character is a hit or miss, it's not for everyone. I understand. But this nuance to Leandro is something I deliberately gave him. Is he going to change throughout the story? Of course. Either way thank you for reading.
It was never stated that he had anything 'romantic' with anyone else other than his previous lover. He had brief encounters with women, but never dated anyone for any period of time. He only loved one woman - and she betrayed him. Nari confessed to him when they were kids. 10 years have passed. She grew up. Not many people would get hung up on crushes they had when they were kids. Hari is a bit complex due to how she is at the beginning of the original manhwa. In the previous chapters she literally stripped down in front of him with no second thoughts or ulterior motive. She's that innocent - yes. As for Leandro, he is quite aware. The excuses are more for himself.
Yes this one. Thank you
It's a pornhwa world
Someone else entirely. The previous record holder for the human race. The human race of Leandro's previous life.
check it out now, it should appear
check it out now, it should appear
Bada - Dragon
Nah, it's fine. I'll only split them if they go over 4k words long. I'm trying to keep an avg chapter length of 2k - 2,5k words, though most of the time it goes over that. And you're right, it's because I tend to be too descriptive xD.
We'll see. Maybe I'll give Dae Ho a funny ending or something like that. I really don't want him staining the words of my doc with his presence.
That's still something I'm thinking about. I have different ideas bouncing around. For example, I was thinking of introducing the MC as an estranged brother/cousin of the Cha family who's been in coma for a long time. Maybe an illegitimate child of Yeong Gu? Or maybe I could simply have the main character die and wake up in the body of a very young OC? So that we can see his development and growth and relationships unfold with some spicy drama. I don't know.
It'll be mostly the same. Even if I replace Dae Ho as the main character's body, the story will still go in the same-ish direction. Though the main problem here is that if do give the MC an OC body, I'll have to rewrite almost all chapters.
As much as I'd like to torment Dae Ho, I'd rather he not exist XD.
Thank you! But there are many issues I'd like to fix, for example Tifa. I didn't have enough time to make the readers like her, so I might as well remove her in the rewrite.
Uhh, let's see. MC gets knocked out by thug, and that thug r*pes his stepmom. As far as I remember, that same thug also r*ped/killed mc's mother? Oh, and he r*pes her while she's like half dead as well.